Hey there, I recently started scripting tutorials series, i just made 2 videos until now. and i really would like you as a beginner or an advanced game developer to give me your feedback. What you liked about it? What you didn’t like? What can be improved?
Thank you in advance!
I’m really excited to hear your constructive feedback and your creative ideas and suggestions !
Although it’s nice that you’re doing scripting tutorials, I have some nit-picks that I would like to point out:
Your audio is varied in places. Your first video sounds normal, a little muffled, but alright, then switching to the next video requires me to boost up the volume. Plus, the music is way to loud on the second one, might want to turn it down a little.
The way you explain certain components like variables, strings, etc, is a not-so good way of explaining it probably a beginner. Saying string to somebody who is just hopping in will have no clue, maybe saying instead a: line of text which is also a string or something similar along the lines of that will defintley improve understanding.
You’re also using things which aren’t neccessary such as game.Workspace, if you want them to understand it though, you can say workspace is just game.Workspace, shorter yet stands out more and easier to type imo 
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I’m also still learning myelf and trying to help others, if you like, you can see an example of one of the tutorials I’ve done here, I won’t say I’m any better either but you can get an idea:
Teaching in steps is also a very recommended idea, don’t go from while true do to automatically math.random and brick colors/etc.
(As I said, I’m not neccessarily in any better position, I’ve messed up the audio a little for the landscape tutorial as its much lower however, practice makes perfect )
Good luck and continue deving 
You can also get some great fact/info from Blender Guru, he makes some pretty good tutorials and explains the process/idea of creating one, its a affirmative to check it out:
Yes i know your tutorials Future Noob! It’s actually interesting and better than a lot of tutorials out there. The points that you pointed out is right. For the mic, In the first video i used my computer mic which was so loud. Fan sounds and stuff like that. in the second tutorial i used my phone mic which was smooth but again not so loud. and actually every video i try to make it better depending on the feedback i get from my friends.
However about game.workspace, I’m not sure but i think giving people a good foundation right away is a good thing to remove confusions from future videos. for strings i actually called them text at first, then i showed what they’re called and why they got called strings.
And for math.random and extra stuff, i just liked to point them out but however i have specialized videos just for them in the future. to add a little bit of excitement into the watcher!
However thank you so much for your feedback, I appreciate it !
Thank you. Really You have no idea how much ive wanted new scripting Tutorials
Im you’re new Numer #1 Fan dud. I’ll watch every vid . Promise
I really appreciate that, and i also promise you to deliver great content !
Thank you so much. Im watching the first one right now