New "Sky Obby". Feedback appreciated!

This game is not complete, but I would still really like to know what people think of it so far!

Hi, here’s a game I’ve been working on lately…

Game link: MEGA TRANSFERRAL OBBY - Roblox

Here are some images:




Any and all feedback is appreciated!
Thanks

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It feels a bit all over the place.

You’ve got Pac-man when you’re coming from a forest(?), then a line walk, a tube… dots, killbrick jumps, jumping on numbers, et cetera, and there’s suns? This game just feels a tad bit all over the place and random and i’m not sure how to feel about it. There’s no theme to it, from what i see, just a “I have to make a obby, here’s some colorful things.”…

I’m sure it’ll probably mesh well with children if that’s the target audience, this is about the stuff that a kid would be liking.

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Yeah, it’s not supposed to have a specific theme… it’s not an escape obby or anything like that.

It’s just supposed to be built-up with random elements and silly designs & shapes.

I hope it doesn’t seem to brainrot-y? That’s certainly not my intention at all. I was hoping for a more unique design with the racetrack and spinning objects.
Please let me know if you have any specific changes in mind.

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Brainrot-y is a term i havent heard of before.

I dont see sharks with shoes, i think its fine.

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Bump: Would like to see a wider range of feedback on this

  1. I liked stage 1, you should make more stages like it
  2. You should put a part right underneath the obby that teleports you to the spawn, so if you fall you don’t need to wait 5 seconds
  3. Some of the spawns weren’t rotated the right way so I respawned facing away from the obby, you should fix that
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Like a kill brick? I can do that

About the spawns, the code I use just transports the player’s position to the checkpoint, so the orientational issues are probably due to how the obby is laid out. I’ll see if I can find a work-around though.

Thanks for the suggestions, please feel free to reply here if you have any more :grinning:

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If u want to fix the orientation js make sure that the part the players being teleported to has its “front” side facing the direction u want the player to face

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As explained, the orientation isn’t actually taken into account in the checkpoint script being used. I will try adding it in when I remember, though.