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#1

Hello! I would like some feedback on my newest course for Course Adventures: (5) [UPDATE!] Course Adventures Beta - Roblox

In order to view the course in the game, you need to collect enough coins. I tried taking a video of the map, but the file would not upload onto the forum, so I took pictures of each level.

The course is the Ocean. You start on the beach, and swim through underwater tunnels.

Pictures

Level 1:

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Level 2:

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Level 3(2 Pictures):

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Level 4:

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Level 5:

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Level 6:

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Level 7:

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Level 8:

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Level 9:

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Level 10:

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Have a good day!

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#2

I really like this build, but it has a lot of conflicting styles. It’s got a nice cartoony feel with lots of well placed parts, BUT it uses a huge amount of ROUNDED parts, and this conflicts with the build, if I had to choose a style it would be the studio made terrain which is original and good for the eyes.

9/10. Great job!

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