Opinion on this teaser that I was made for a game?

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Hey all, I was wanting to get a few opinions on this teaser that I put together for a game that I never got around to finishing.

Here’s the link:
https://www.roblox.com/games/4831770902/1917-teaser

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Add a loading screen. Seeing all the assets load in is cool and all, but there should be a loading screen.

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I agree with you, it would add a lot.

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Its cool the expression on the soldier’s face to the plane flying to the scenery, it’s really “depressing” in a good way because there is a war. The music also fits in nicely with the theme.

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Appreciate the feedback guys, I did add the loading screen as suggested. I also disabled the default core StarterGui and set the ScreenGuis to IgnoreGuiInset.