I started GFX about 2 weeks ago. Here is a simple render:
Please let me know how it could be better or if I did something wrong.
Please let me know how it could be better or if I did something wrong.
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That’s nice. I’d recommend adding textures to the seat, and the surroundings. Hopefully this helped!
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This looks pretty cool, I agree with About_Dev, you should add some more textures so we know what these objects look like. Maybe you could make the seat wooden if it’s a wooden seat, it’s up to you. But this still looks great, 9/10!
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Pretty good GFX, nice job on that.
Grass is coming through the wood.
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It looks like a pretty good gfx especially for starting only 2 weeks ago! 
Keep up with it cause you are talented in this.
Some things you can improve on this is…
Posing
Ok, clearly you are using a rig which is Although the leg is going through the chair.
Or the leg looks pretty stiff.
The foot looks like it disappeared as well.
Other stuff to watch out for
Also, correct me what’s happening here because all I see is a floating duck
The grass is going through the wood here
Plants are transparent?
Is this transparent as well?
Not bad for your gfx with only 2 weeks of experience 
amazing work! Keep on improving can’t wait to see what you do~
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Thank you very much, I didnt notice the transparent parts and the duck was an accessory
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Looks good for a beginner! Still a lot of things to fix and improve on though.
First o all the cups have a weird shading glitch which draws attention to it.
Leg is going through the wood.
I feel like the person behind her isn’t noticeable. They seem out of place. It is kind of dark and the shading could use some work. There is too much going on too.
All in all, looks good, but there is room to improve on!
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