Rate my GFX/Character intro for animation x/10

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#1

This was designed to be Intros for characters within a Animation Made for a MMC Armed Forces group - Russian Armed Force’s.

This was done within Cinema 4D with no editing from Photoshop apart from text. The lighting effect is from realistic lighting coming though a door/windows off screen.

As this has no editing I just want to know general views on this screenshot, of positioning or lighting or even background props.

Building designs - @YourRussianLeader

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#2

Oh wow, excellent job… This is a piece of art!

I would definitely rate this 9.7/10, I feel like the character needs a little bit more light, not much though.

Keep it up.

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#3

@anxyeity Cheers, as said this is just a start and needs alot of improvement in my eyes with backgrounds and the lighting itself. :grinning:

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#4

I’d give it a 9.5/10
pretty cool - good job

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#5

The gold within the table when using the lighting system you are using makes some of it gold but the rest of it greenish. Apart from that it’s good.

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#6

Yeah, I have realized, and when I do it again I will rectify mate

#7

Lovely gfx, 9/10 more lighting would be good

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#8

Yeah cheers, lighting is the biggest factor here. I remember that next time

#9

Wow, fantastic! Amazing work my friend!

Suggestion: Just what @anxyeity mentioned above, the character could use a bit more light. Other than that small adjustment, you’re looking good!

Rating: 9.6/10

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#10

Yeah, it was a quick edit, and as it’s a animation Intro I need to do more editing within C4D. Thanks for the rating though much appreciated. :grinning:

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#11

Clap Clap Amazing art. It looks fabulous. 9.3/10 :slight_smile:

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#12

Cool! Don’t know much about 3D design myself but this is very impressive.

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#13

Looks nice but the render is really grainy and the lighting seems too dark. I like the face rig you have though. And the furniture looks well made.

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#14

It’s was a screenshot from a clip of a animation, that’s in production. The furniture is designed by @YourRussianLeader

#15

The character looks really decent. Like all the details you added into the image!

  • However i would suggest you add, some lighting to the building parts it seems to be a little dark in the back area. Next to the character and you could add a bit of lighting in the room as well! the background looks quite good but there seems, to be some light purple on the curtain.
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Overall your render looks really. Decent keep up the good work man hope to see more soon!!

8/10

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#16

Purple is due to the screenshot as the background lighting is moving with the camera. However I have gone back to change this as I saw it when I posted. Cheers for the comment, it seems lighting is one of my downfalls :grinning: