Hi, I made gfx and fixed render noise. 
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I love that effect on the text on the top. Other than that, I can’t really give feedback, except that the legs look a little stationary. Maybe make it look like she’s walking.
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Woww! I love it! Me personally, I’d change the white font, to a slightly different darker color, to be able to see it better. But, overall I love it! I’d give it an 8 or 9! Great job! Keep up this great work and can’t wait to see more!
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4/10.
Legs need more of a pose, and lighting isn’t looking good. The background is cool, though.
I also do not like the font.
Maybe have her holding like a clipboard?
Not bad. But really needs more fixing
First, the lighting is a bit off well, it’s fine by me but try to make a bit upfront and have rimlighting on the robloxian.
Second, the pose is really lacking like real basic. look up a reference or imagine a pose that’ll work using your body.
Third, the text need something like an outline to them but overall these look fine.
Fourth, the background might need some tinkering with either with effects or combining two backgrounds stitch together.
Overall I’ll give it 8/10.
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Okay, I not have any idea of poses how to stand. xD