Restaurant/Cafe (Feedback)

Hello! This is my first time posting, and in this post I am futuring a restaurant/cafe that’s going for sale soon!
Before I sell it, I would like some feedback about what I can improve, what I can add more etc.
Any feedback would be loved.
Don’t be scared to go hard if there’s anything you don’t like.
Images below.

Sincerly, Dev_Chamy

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Hey there! Looks great, I really enjoy the use of Brick within the build, however I feel like concrete would further suit the place instead of Cobblestone, that’s all from me for now.

Good luck!

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Hey, Amazing piece of work here. I can’t see any models and as I am award all created by yourself well done the building is very nice!

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Requires some interior and improvements to the landscape. Other than that looks pretty neat.

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Looks great! I love how much detail you added to the walls, it looks very modern.
However, I have a few suggestions to help improve the design:

  • Add some interior to it, you could try adding flowers, candles, plates, glasses, menu cards to the tables. You could also add money jars, glasses, shelves, cashiers, etc to the counter.
    Thirdly, you should try adding to the kitchen area, things like machines, glasses, plates, fridges, and ovens could be added.

  • Add some terrain to the outside, you could add trees, grass, rocks, logs, sticks, etc. You could also try changing the ground to a low-poly style, the paths could be a light or darker grey than the road too.

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Okay, sounds awesome! I’ll add in these things now, and I’ll come with results later.
Thanks for the advices everyone!

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Looks amazing, Maybe add more to it as it is a little plain.

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Okay! Done some improvements, thanks for the advices!

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Will do more now, but that’s what I have done so far!

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That’s it for today, done most of the things you guys said such as added tills, vases with a “flower” etc.

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I really like it. I would buy it if I had the robux. The lighting is very good and the furniture looks nice.

What you could focus on next

I would focus on adding more chairs/items to the interior, as others have said. The interior looks quite bland.

Other than that, good job.

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Yeah, and it got sold yesterday for 5000 robux! So, won’t be posting on this thread any more.

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Good job, I’m glad you found the right buyer.

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A bit empty in detail I would add trees and plants to it

I did, as you can see in later images. :wink:

I only see one chair and table, maybe add a few more! :smiley:

I also think you should add a fire place in the middle and have the restaurant name on it!

Asking for prices is now against rules, sorry!

Woah! This good right of the bat! Try adding paintings around the walls, plants, fountain, and add like different materials on the floor like a carpet, marble, etc… I suggest in the concrete area the kitchen I would add a different texture because it looks so bland. The outside looks empty but I am sure you would add trees etc… But I love it so far, keep up the work! :100: Also sorry didn’t see the improvements they are good!

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Quite impressive, you could sell it for easily 5 - 10K without tax.
If you want, I can hire you for a percentage of my cafe, 15 - 30% profit on all sales.
DM me at eackerman1#2743 if you are interested.
I Also will give a larger amount as high as 40% each and leaving the rest of the funds for ads and other developers
:happy3:

Really nice use of textures! Also you give off a cartoon style, not too much but noticeable which makes it look AWESOME!

Overall I would just stick to adding more and removing anything that doesn’t fit.

Good luck on this anyway, I believe it has some potential!

I really like this style of Cafe buildings. But some things could be better, nothing can be perfect.

Anyways, it’s kinda empty in the second building. I would sell it for 8K+ Robux! That’s all i can say, since i like it.

Good luck!