Just wanted to see what others thought of these few songs I made! (They are meant to be looped.)
Loading Screen
Loading Screen V2
Oil Mines
Shop Theme
Basic Mines
Base Theme
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First piece appears to be heavy amount of lead, somewhat highly vibrant tone.
Second piece is my personal favorite, the pads creates a mysterious setting with tense undertones, reminds me of certain pieces of concentration music.
Third piece feels like a lot of arpeggiators, confusing undertone and somehow welcoming.
Fourth piece is vibrant but unlike the first, it is mixed with a “magical” tone.
Fifth piece is somewhat fine, but it lacks percussive sounds.
I wonder if it was intentional that a few pieces of them were using the same instruments.
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It is intentional, i’m trying to make all the music connected in a way. That’s why most of the parts are synth.
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I really like them, they all sound good but there are a few things about it I’m iffy about
The first one doesn’t have much beat to it, there’s nothing that really keeps me attached It’s kinda plain. What could make it better is having more instruments come in mid-way through and adding more life to it.
The second one has a mystifying tone to it, It really keeps me into it.
The third gives me a stereo-type vibe, an abnormal beat to it (In a good way)
The fourth gives a classical feel to it
The fifth is by far my favorite, It gives a real menacing, mysterious, frightening flow.
Sorry if this was too descriptive, I have a musical ear and get way to descriptive when it comes to music
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I could definitely see this music in a game somewhere! I don’t know about anyone else, but that last song gave me a slight stranger things vibe 
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They’re amazing but if I had to change any I would make them more smooth instead of futuristic if that makes any sense. Plus all of its very loud or it’s just the fact I have ear buds in.
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For a bit of context, the music is for a mining type of game.
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I am a stranger things fan so maybe thats where it comes from.
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I can see that from your avatar 
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Oh, thats just supposed to be some ugly thing.
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Its all using synth so that may be why.
Ayee, when I heard it I pictured mining
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Music is very good. 10/10, nothing I would change.
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Have added on a extra part to Loading Screen!
Please let me know which one you like better.
I like the second version, because now it is slightly “richer” and less monotone-ish melody.
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I love it! For the loading screen i suggest choosing V2 since it sounds better.
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The second one sounds much better, very classy and more life to it. love it
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Pretty good overall, my only concern is that since they’re short they could possibly get a bit repetitive if they’re being heard on loop for long periods of time.
I like the synth choices though, these all complement each other nicely.
Kinda curious about the Loading Screen V2 though, I noticed it has a bit of a darker undertone since you use Bb - A - G instead of B - A - G in the background synth. If that’s intentional that’s kind of neat, but otherwise if it’s meant to be cheery I’d suggest maybe raising it.
Either way, great job on these!
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Its meant to be both cheery and somewhat spooky.
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Here is a few more pieces of music I have made over the last few months.
Please let me know what you think! (Note they are all repeating songs.)
4 Dwarf Zone
12 Dwarf Zone
15 Dwarf Zone
15 Dwarf Zone V2
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