Second Blender Animation [Glock-20]

Somehow between last animation I made and this one I learnt what a graph editor is - critique appreciated.

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It’s not too bad but could be sped up 1.5-2 times faster.

I recommend using a base model Glock 20, as your model seems like it has upgraded sights and slide cuts, but that is just from a design point of view.

One last thing I think you should change is to make the magazine release more “clean”, so to say. You can’t really tell much from the animation of magazine changing. Removing the sudden arm movements can also help the animation look more “natural”.

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Looks awesome!

Few suggestions, make sure the arms don’t phase through each other, cause that would be unrealistic.
Also, you could improve the timing to have it look less stiff. Use some easing styles, or maybe graph out the motion yourself.
Otherwise, it looks great! :grinning_face_with_smiling_eyes: