I created my second ever scene! How does it look? Any tips on improvements? Also, I use photoshop, does anybody have any suggestions for photoshop brushes to use?
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So, its pretty good, but the biggest thing that throws me is the ocean. It seems much to close to be actually seen through the windows, but that is just my opinion. It gives me abandoned vibes (as the light is only in the center of McDonalds), but it is a very creative mix between magic and a fast food restraunt. Great work!
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Oh yea, the goal for me was to give a sort of “restaurant on the ocean” vibe
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I quite enjoy this render. This is really nice and gives me very calm vibes. I think the lighting is very harsh in the middle. It seems as if there is one light that is WAY more powerful then the others, I would love to see the lighting balanced out with the lights. I would love to see a more relaxed pose on the roblox figure. Overall it’s SUPER detailed. Quite enjoy it!
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The lighting effects could be better and the ocean make it look very natural. Your characters theme, and the butterfly looks very bright, or happy in comparison to the cafe’s dark and grim look. I would recommend you use another character and get rid of the butterfly too.
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If the restaurant is supposed to be dark and grim, I’d turn down the lighting in a middle a bit. I’d also remove that butterfly and character as it dosen’t fit with the theme.
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This looks like a well made render. But the only thing that’s kinda off from the rendered scene is that big spotlight in the middle, tone it down a little, and it will now look like a picture that I will hang on to bedroom wall.
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its pretty good considering its a free model. What i mean is ive used this free model and this render looks nice and makes me see this model in a different way (this model in my game is where i usually hangout with friends so its a big part of our game and i get to see it in a render here.)
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. If anyone’s curious, here were the before and after photos