Shonen Defenders

[thatboydevelops99]

Please can people give me feedback on my anime rougelite game “Shoen Defenders” Shonen Defenders - Roblox

[Fe_ct]

1. the UIs are really nice
2. the custom cursor is a nice touch and fits nicely with the theme of the game
3. start of tutorial should be a little more clear, i don’t have a weapon, i have fists.
   
   
4. dash cooldown doesn’t count down, it just stays at 5 until its useable again
   
   
5. injured swordsman healthbar is at the top of my screen even though i’m not fighting any enemy, and there’s no injured swordsmans in the tutorial (edit: found him)
   
   
6. killing the level 9000 tutorial mob was very easy, and gave me power level 9975, after leaving the tutorial I no longer have a power level stat which is confusing, what does power level even do? game never tells me
7. game is clearly very well made, and feels fun to play when there’s a lot going on on the screen
   
   
8. no idea what i’m supposed to do after the tutorial
   
   
9. your scripts are far too long, seperate them into modules
   
   
10. whatever i’m supposed to interact with here does not work
    
    
11. the page buttons are blocked by chat
    
    
12. would be nice if tutorial had background music
13. after playing the main game, i realised the game would be much more enjoyable without the tutorial, and much of the game is fairly self-explanitory
14. attack cooldowns should be faster
15. game tells me i died even though i won? or did i die? idk
    
    

overall this game is incredibly well made and will definitely do well

[mrshadyman274 (BroblocodeX)]

Hey thatboydevelops99! I played your anime roguelite on stream, and honestly, there’s a lot of good stuff happening already. The defend-the-core idea keeps the tension high, and picking up new weapons and abilities as you go really keeps the run interesting. I enjoyed playing it.

From my side, the main thing I’d improve is the early-game clarity. The UI and tutorial could guide new players a bit better, and I bumped into a couple of small bugs, but nothing that hurt the experience.

Scores: Gameplay 8 • Visuals 6 • Originality 6 • Polish 6 | Games Radar
you’re on a strong track — tighten up the onboarding and this one could genuinely stand out.