Built this not to long ago seems like it could use more detail to it. I added this to my Portfolio but it would be cool if i could update it.
Any feedback would be great 
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Hi SelectedArctic! This might not be much of help but if you need feedback for a styled build like this, I recommend checking these places my friend @ch00chuf1 built for an idea.
https://www.roblox.com/games/3341953266/ch00chuf1s-Place-Number-67
https://www.roblox.com/games/1295317310/Nieve-Meadows-Holo
He has some other detailed builds but I some clans deactivated the places.
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I really love the style you’re going for! The biggest thing I can recommend is uniformity. You have cracks and crevices with varying thicknesses, (for example, the floor), and they don’t all line up with the style you’re attempting here. I would also encourage you to experiment with adding different geometry. Play around and get abstract with it!
The end of the corridor is a missed opportunity to add some extra world building. Some ideas include a window, an airlock door, control panels, the list goes on. Get creative with it!
Finally, try to make your color scheme more apparent. right now you have a saturated orange as your tertiary color, and they make a minuscule appearance in your build. Consider changing it to a less saturated color, adapting the surrounding color scheme to compliment your tertiary color, or just adding more orange throughout the build.
Overall I would say this was a really nice attempt at a sleek sci-fi inspired build, and I’m excited to see to see where you take it in the future!
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I think the colors could be changed to a more darker theme and the doors could be sliding doors which are very easy to script, other than that I really like the overall design.
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Honestly I think the main thing here is lighting. The entire thing is just too bright.
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like a sci-fi hospital of some sort
ok awesome ill change that, thanks!
