[SLIGHTLY IMPROVED] Feedback on 2D Artwork

What’s Up? It’s SupieUp! I’ve took into consideration the feedback that was given to me from my last two posts. Have I improved? If not, what else can I change? Here’s what I drew:

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It is well drawn, you should only make the head not so big and a little bit thin

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I really like this drawing! The only problem for me is that that hair lighting is a bit odd.

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Well made! My only problem is the hair lighting.

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Yes, thank you for your suggestions! I’ll try to work on the hair lighting! :grin:

Her neck should be positioned better. Either closer to her ear or pull the ear closer to the right.
Otherwise, nice work!

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