Hello! I’m dark. I have recently attempted to figure out how to build in roblox and this is my first build that I have made. Feedback is appreciated
what was I attempting to make?
I was attempting to make an 1 room apartment for a vampire hence that is why there is no kitchen. Somethings I have modeled myself and other things I just put together using the tools that roblox gave me.
The colors seem off. I feel like you could change the colors of the walls and floor to improve the quality. It also seems kind of dark. Maybe adding a few more lights could help as well. The chair looks kind of odd to me too. It looks too wide and not tall enough. I do like the layout of the build (and I like the windows), but some things can be changed to improve it.
Hope this helps you!
I would recommend using colours which are more “dull”, less bright colours are more realistic. Were as bright colours are cartoony. Try making the objects have more detail. Big spaces/emptiness = lack of detail. Keep trying to achieve a goal, this will help you succeed in making a better project.
I like it is pretty but it would look even better if you added more colors with that it would be nicer in my opinion it’s a good job 
The colours that you used are dark and makes the house look very small and “sad”. You should try using a lighter colour for the wood walls and a different colour for the floor. The walls also seem quite plain, and I would suggest that you place some paintings there. For the doors, you should make the length a little smaller as right now, it looks very big and takes up the wall (Picture 3). You should also consider making the door nob bigger as it is really small for the size of the door.
Hope this helps! 
I would suggest colors which are more realistic. Adding more details is also something you should consider doing
The apartment looks good But I’d use less vibrant colors on stuff (the flowers and those books in the bookshelf)
I’d Remove the textures from the shower and set the material to Glass
And I’d change the color of the walls to a more bright color (I had a color in mind but I forgot, I think it was “burlap” or something like that)
It’s okay. It can use some work like the following:
The materials used seem to be just wood, smooth brick, and neon. In my opinion, wood in that color does not look good for anything. Also, the floor looks very basic with the material.
The shower looks very off with that texture as well.
The rooms screenshots you provided makes the rooms looks small. It could be just the angle but the room is quite small and the roof could be raised a bit.
Some of the models looks basic as well. I would suggest making them more detailed by changing their material.
Other than the suggestions, it’s alright.
It looks pretty good, I agree with everybody else on the criticism, but to add on. I feel that the d̶e̶c̶a̶l̶s images on the rug and on the shower look a little out of place,
I love the little detail of the peashooter, isn’t it a little ironic? 
