Spaceship Critique/Review

building

#1

Hey!

I hope I’m not the only fan on Killzone here! I created this ISA cruiser and I’d like either criticism, or general review.

Pictures:
https://gyazo.com/5bf0ae9b02ebfa2cf52b50f4c55c18a8
https://gyazo.com/962d36842290dc75cf5e34406c7c32ad
https://gyazo.com/f1f3926e2587e24f709a8b4122dc30c7

[You can fly your avatar in the display game with “:fly”]
Link: Click > Cruiser

Appreciate it! Thanks.


#2

Tell us what is it for.


#3

What it does is mentioned under game description, but he should’ve put it in post as well


#4

I love it. I keep thinking the skybox is bricks, lol.

Happy birthday by the way!


#5

Hello @BloodSpring,

Can I just say being a builder myself, how awesome that build is, you must have spent a while working on that and it sure paid off. It is that good that it reminds me very much of a star wars spaceship as a whole.

Review:
Improvements:

  • Add an inside section
  • Focus more on adding lighting effects, using light beams and work with the lighting in general, like colour correction etc

Tick lists:

  • Main ship model looks amazing
  • Good use of neon to fit the ship
  • Very detailed in every part of the ship

Feedback:
Personal feedback as a builder myself, it is an awesome build, very detailed, few things could be improved but are minor and still without them makes a great build. If I was you, I would work more with things that will make the ship look even more appealing, such as beams, lighting effects and colour correction.

Final thoughts:
Run threw the list I gave you and work on them, then it should look astonishing.

Little note:
Happy birthday!


#6

I think it looks great, it’s detailed and the use of neon is just right so it’s not excessive.

Good job!


#7

Good! My only feedback would be to enhance the details on the top.
I feel like it doesn’t suit the rest of the spacecraft.

Overall, nice.


#8

This truly is Amazing. I really love it. The graphics are good as well. Didn’t join the game, but judging by screenshots.