Start of map feedback

I have been making the start of a map for about an hour now, I was messing around with the lighting and just started the build. Please give feedback and suggestions including on the lighting.


Updated currently remaking the rocks and bushes. I also changed the lighting a bit

Added new stuff and slightly tweaked lighting

More Trees/Slightly less brighter/Addedsomefog

Changedterraincolours/Addedrocks/Changedwaterappearance

addedbushs/changedgrasscolourmore/paintedtheterrainmore

addedbloomeffect(might keep)/Smallupdate + Potential map thumbnail

Added a new area

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Looks good so far but we’re gonna need a bit more of the map to give you some advice! I’d say finish your map & focus on the lighting right after.

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The tree leaves look a bit too bright to go with the ground’s nice green.
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Apart from that, it’s looking great for a start! Good luck, mate. :wink:

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Updated current state of map:

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This is beautiful, it could use some more trees and the lighting is a bit too bright. But overall this is great, I want to be there.

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Updates: More Trees/Slightly less brighter/Addedsomefog

Changedterraincolours/Addedrocks/Changedwaterappearance

Good work so far! One thing I suggest is either editing the green on the leaves of the tree or editing the colour of the terrain grass to match each other. This will improve the overall colour representation across your game and provide it a full and complete feel when the player joins.

I’m excited to see what comes of this!

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Do you think this is better?

Looks a little bit better! You’ve got the right idea going, just continue to adjust it with the more things you add to your map to have the colours all match nicely. :slight_smile:

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addedbushs/changedgrasscolourmore/paintedtheterrainmore

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Added a new area

Since you’re asking for feedback this should have been posted in #help-and-feedback:cool-creations.

It looks decent and I think the lighting compliments the terrain very well.

The only suggestion I can make is to be careful of how much bloom you add; the sun seems to be setting so be mindful of how bright you make the map. The last image posted in the OP looks slightly too bright when you look at the grass when comparing it to where the sun is in the sky. Realistically, it would be much darker if the sun was setting.

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The sun would be rising not setting.

What type of map your going for?

The trees are overly repetitive with similar designs as if your going to place bushes try making have a more larger structure. There isn’t much added to the map it really comes down on what your wanting on the map. I’m certain that your making this for fun, if not consider to view existing maps or even showcase to gather smaller ideas on what to add next.

There are only repetitive trees and that’s all: if you lack ideas brainstorm ideas then include them within your build, I would focus on adding some depth to the scene.

What you can do is try to improve to your own abilities and you will learn on what to add next. Otherwise it’s a start but not much progress!

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