Story Game Lobby Feedback

Hello everyone,

I recently started working on a story game (name is undisclosed), and I was tasked with creating a lobby.

Before I send this to my comissioner, I’d like to take your feedback on how it looks (rate out of 10), I’d love to hear from you in the given areas;

  • Polishedness: How polished do you think my lobby looks? Let me know.
  • Visual Appearance: Does it appear too bright, too dark, or is somethign just not right?
  • Use Of Materials: Are the assets well-used? Do you think everything is in the correct spot?
  • Audience Appearance: Do you think the lobby fits all ages? Furthermore, will all age groups (1-18) find it good?

Any ideas for improvement, let me know.




Thank you for your time and feedback,
(also I apologize for low quality images. PC is very old.)
CoderLuau

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Anyone have feedback? Let me know.