Well, there’s 0 need for feedback as it is full of free models everywhere, didn’t even load properly and already saw AlvinBlox’s Daily Reward, not even mentioning the pos/size of UIs on a mobile device are incredibly bad. The whole game is just a gathering of free models and some bad UIs that you made (as seen in attached image).
I suggest learning English and scripting using Alvinblox’s beginner series, GnomeCode’s beginner series and TheDevKing’s beginner series as well. Then you can start working on small projects that you like and keep them private, the more you work, the more you learn, around 6-12 months of doing this constantly will make you a much better game dev than most people on this platform.
And also, don’t ask for feedback on free models, because those are not made by you.