Reposting since the last one didn’t get too much feedback, if you wanna see it here it is, it has some extra info on it too about the characters Test Game Made for Sister
Basically I made a game for my sister and I want you guys to make sure it’s perfect before I finally show my sister the finished product! I’d appreciate any huge blocks of text you give me, and also I do still have to add some stuff (like a climbing animation) so ignore that. Thank you!
HONESTLY
This is so wholesome!! 
Must I say the game didnt even need sprinting?
(Not because I accidentally found out at the last second LOL)
But mainly because I actually wanted to take my time an explore an really take in somthing like this of its craft!
The animations were very good aswell :"D!!
Allthough was a bit short – I still enjoyed it very VERY much, an I am sure you will even more!!!
The ending note wasnt cringy eighter, I get what you meant to, an honestly had me melting – Shes lucky to have a brother like you! 
Really made my day man. Not enough words can express my joy right now!!!
Like for her birthday along the game you made her?
Sure! Her username is ImmaKuriboh and her birthday is on Aug 12.
(Just dont donate toooo much both me and my sister have a tendency to feel guilty when receiving unexpected gifts lol)
Whyd I say sure that means i do mind I meant not at all I always do this…
Okay :"D! – I will keep it noted!
Please @ me a day before it just incase I do forget sorry! Got alot on my plate to handle!!
B-but that goes against everything I know D:
Just today I gave a someone a birthday gift too .. .
But I will try my best to stay in reasonable amount then :"D!!
I got you when yours comes around too :'3
Cheers mate! – Have a wonderful rest of your day!!
This is genuinely one of the greatest uses of Roblox studio i have seen yet!
It was all really well done!
I would say the only improvement is to make the maps a little more polishes (maybe via lighting, some small details, something)
But all in all, I can confidently say, you’re really cool!
I unironically got cooked by the cat TT
it took me a while.
O.O UHHHHHHHH
Lol thanks i really appreciate it! My sister will be happy 
Thank you! I appreciate your feedback.
Oh yeah by the way if anyone wants to draw a logo or thimbnails I am open to that! You dont have to though I can always make my own.
@KingAlijahforever
As you requested I mentioned you a day before the “big day.”
Of course if you choose to back out that is okay, you are already doing a lot for us. No pressure.
I made a promise – an I plan on keeping it!!
On her acc – would you be able to create a;
4k - Robux
Gamepass so I may buy it? – I dont have premium so I cant simply send it 
An I love to help out when I can :"D!!! – what I do best :3
I will thank you! 
(Im gonna be sneaky sneak onto her phone to make it lol she will never know)
@KingAlijahforever
Okay if im correct there should be a pass on ImmaKuriboh’s Place called Kuri Eats Bomb that is 4K robux.
@IceCreamSodaBeam – great :"D!! – should I buy it today? or or tomorrow? As for it is your surprise to her afterall!
Uhhh today as it takes a while to pend.
I dont think she will see it until i tell her so yeah
