Test Game Made for Sister

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I need soms of those huge blocks of text thats just feedback for my game that I always see people do when giving advice lol :laughing:

Here is my game: https://www.roblox.com/share?code=d68aa2a074675449a8035b66024fde58&type=ExperienceDetails&stamp=1785282653372

Also apologies if you dont understand any of the story, it’s just meant for my sister, but here’s an optional rundown of the characters’ lore:

Kuri is the character you play as. She has a fallen angel named Yew (or Yewy so you dont confuse it with the word you), but he dont appear so he isnt as important. Basically she is insane because of him telling her to do bad things, but some stuff happened and he’s good now. Kuri loves bombs and other weapons.

Wawa is Kuri’s brother, he also has a creature in his head. His lore has a lot more to do with computer things because he has coding powers and can do stuff really similarly to exploiters in Roblox. The creature in his head is named Smiley, and Smiley comes from the computer that Wawa is on that’s running Roblox. Everyone is a player on their own computer btw, nobody knows how they speak and walk and talk on their own.

Silver is Kuri and Wawa’s mom. Silver is friends with a bunch of spirits. They help her do things like fly. She can communicate to any living soul and understand them without words, allowing her to talk to the spirits that most others cannot see (Wawa can see them as he uses his exploiter coding powers to higlight them or whatever)

Grand is Kuri and Wawa’s dad. He has no powers and is just a normal guy. What makes him strong is that he is just so good at fighting and with weapons that he can beat people with powers. Basically his power is being amazing. He likes guns.

Ellis is a bee-human, her mom had experiments done to her involving her goving birth to Ellis… we dont talk about the experiments cuz i dont wanna get banned for talking about slightly more adult topics, but she is as sweet as a cinnamon roll and is very nice.

Rig (also called AD short for Animating Dummy) is an animating rig. He can grow limbs and body parts kinda like Niko Robin from One Piece, though he only does so when absolutely necessary. He is also as sweet as a cinnamon roll, and he can only talk in emoticons.

Ribby was a part of the Insane Asylum that was secretly an evil organization called SLIDE that illegally does experiments on people like Kuri and Ellis (did I mention Kuri was trapped in this asylum for 6 years?) but he switched sides. He has electric and teleportation powers.

Stiff is a cat.

The story takes place in a game called FIND THAT BLOCK, a world different from the one they originate from. It’s a safe game for kids all ages where Grand cant have realistic guns and Rig can actually type in chat (though he usually doesn’t, he’s used to only emojis). Everyone goes there every so often because of how safe and fun it was compared the their original world.

FIND THAT BLOCK is a game where every map has a block you must find, but every map has a twist. The block might teleport, or run away from tou, or have centipedes guard it, or in this game, be a present.

If you want me to explain the story with more unnecessary blocks of text just ask. TwT

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if this game is for your sister why do you want us to give you feedback on it

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So it can be good so that when i show it to my sister on her birthday she will like it

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how old is your sister? asking not for my friend, just to clarify target audience.

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13-15 age (range for privacy reasons)
Characters

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Forgot to delete some rigs and fix some bugs btw ill do that tomorrow
Has anyone tested it yet?

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i have played on a phone an pc
here is my thoughts (please note that i do not play roblox games, sorry about that; also i am dumb):

  • there’s a part in first cat fight area
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    not sure if it’s intentional here probably it’s worth removing if not
  • all characters look scary, honestly. If you take a kid that grown up on fairy-tales without internets and show them, the kid will drop bombs from their look. But this can be my subjective opinion.
  • i am stuck at the boss fight, it’s easy to guess how to evade first two hits; it’s easy to guess that player needs to climb the construction the cat builds but i could not: no double jump, no ladders… so that was too hard for me(yes, i am dumb)
  • probably give the construction different color, because it blends with floor and environment, especially on the phone, and it’s hard to see where to go; that does not make game easier
  • also my character wears my hat, not sure if this is intentional
  • as a person, who somewhat related to roblox development, i can understand what they are talking about in the area where they find the key, but not sure this is OK for people who do not know what roblox assets are
  • your story in OP is good and probably resembles your family (if so this is a plus for your sister’s experience), but it’s barely related to game since the game does not tell the story and thus it’s hidden for other players (who can get into the game from Roblox directly).

thanks for infinite attempts in the boss fight though!

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Thanks, most of the lore is unrelated because remember, the game takes place in a “safe world” for kids where they dont have to worry about their real life problems. It was just to kind of fill in the lore gaps that my sister would already know.
If I included all the details then that would make the game unsuitable for younger kids.
Also, yes, almost every character is based off a real person from my family or a friend.
The part I forgot to delete. Also I can nerf the obbies and make it easier to see.

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Oh yeah and also you arent dumb, my dad struggled on the obby too, so I do need to make it easier.

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Updated the game for some bugs and mistakes

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Not getting too much feedback so ill repost this

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Elloooo – very sweet of you what your doing for her :"3!!

I will test it out for ya!

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