The Evening [SHOWCASE] (friends build)

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Hey Developers

Posting this on behalf of my friend @Ayfoox

We would like to get some feedback on a showcase game she had made, any feedback will mean a lot to her.

This is her first build, which features a snowy landscape with a little bit of added fantasy - a spikey cave!

Heres the game link: The Evening • [SHOWCASE] - Roblox

please let us know what you think :slight_smile:

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Could you include screen shots?

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Build is too good, trees too. But it is too small and undetailed despite the atmosphere is too good. Also wrap the place with terrain and make the void invisible. It’s a good start for showcases!

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its a better experience in-game, especially with max graphics.

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heres a picture from the thumbnail as well.