The Feather | Chapter I: The Mirror (Feedback)

Hello! It’s M0RS, I’ve been working on this only for 4 hours, Basically You and your friends want to adventure and entered in this haunted/old house that Jayden, Mary and Larence toke in the 1940s, After their disappearance the house was taken by an unknown homeless old man, You will have to escape from there avoiding the psycho man to continue the story, once you recollect the enough tools and stuff to escape you will have to get through the Famous “Big Man” entity. I would like to see what y’all think about the graphics and stuff, bugs like the door never mind about them because they are made on purpose to continue the map soon, I just need some feedback so please tell me what you guys think about it!
Hope you like it!

Link: The Feather Test - Roblox

Tip: Don’t Look to the mirror’s

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Aside from the fact that I literally have no backstory on what I’m doing, it looks like a cool game, I just would like a better explanation as too what is going on.

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Check the story now, sorry for not letting people know, thanks for the feedback!

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Its to dark on mobile. Can’t see anything even with the flashlight.

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That’s Weird, I don’t know if it’s the brightness of the phone but in pc it looks perfect with the flashlight

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I can’t see a single thing.
Also I suppose I get stuck on the stairs maybe try adding a invisible wedge at the stairs to prevent players from being stuck or climbing the stairs rather than actually walking up the stairs

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Alright Thank you for the feedback!

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Looks great all I have to say was the stairs are hard to get up

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