The Ghost Outside of Town


This is a first-person adventure thriller. I need some feedback about how I’d make it better, and also where I’m going with the story. It (a forest) is a pretty cliche place to put a horror game, so I need some ideas about what should happen and where the story should go.

Sorry there’s not that much yet. I’ve been trying to make more of this, but it’s difficult since I’ve been running low on inspiration, so I just decided I’ll post this now and ask for ideas. Tell me what you think about it so far!