Thoughts on build

Ok so I’ve been making this and I want some feed back so I can “perfect” the current parts to get tips for later and just to have a 2nd opinion.

Anyways the basic theme is a mix of several of my favourite games to make a ultimate game tailored to myself.

Some parts are based off

Anyways heres the images.

Thanks for any feedback :slight_smile:

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For the PBCC I play that game and that stuff looks good but you should add the lazers for the core also

Hey man, I like your builds! They just seem a bit bland & lacks of detail.
You might have used a bit too much smoke on the coolant section, other then that it seems fine!

It’s clear that you are a builder that likes to show off detail in everything, which is a great start! Well done :smiley: The theming is great and everything you have made so far fits perfectly with your current goals.

My only criticism would be to stay away from the bright colours of the neon texture and also stay away from using some of the Roblox Default Fonts. Changing the neon textures to something more calm on the eyes would most certainly improve the appeal of the build, and the change of font is just something that I would personally want - it is ultimately your decision.

Anyways, well done and continue with the great work!

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Ill take a look at what else may fit thanks!

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NOTE: IT MAY OR MAY NOT BE obvious BUT THIS IS VERY early IN THE MAKING.

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(pardon me if this isn’t a horror game) I… Don’t think that really looks creepy, and you shouldn’t have windows. Otherwise, your building skills are very good! :slightly_smiling_face:

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I don’t think it really spooky like it intended to I think it looks Like a reactor and well modeled, that’s all.

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It’s great, the semi realistic really looks good with the style!!!

Keep up the great work, my fellow, ROBLOXAIN!!!

A lot of stuff needs detail. Almost everything is misaligned, tip: Only go below 0.125 increments if you HAVE to. Some places are unrealistically thin, and would snap in real life (coolant support structure). If you took the “Coolant” off of the coolant boxes, you wouldn’t know it was coolant containers, add more detail.

Ok, as it happens that coolant image is old as I accidentally deleted half of it so when I remake it I’ll consider this. And I will also go and see where it’s “snap-able”, thanks for the feedback!

Totally! I forgot to add “This looks super great, and would look cool in a game”