Thoughts on my first Render

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I’ve been learning blender 2.9 lately (it’s really different from 1.8, lol)
and this is the result;

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Hello, I just wanted to say that the amount of watermarks makes the photo really hard to look at it. If you could reduce the amount of text on the screen to something like one text box across the screen or something along the bottom or the bottom corner that would be great.

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your wish shall be granted ; just updated it

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Alright here is my thoughts.

  • The left side of the picture doesn’t have that much going on compared to the right side of the picture.
  • The texture on the wall seems kind of stretched. (I think at least)
  • In terms of representing the game, I can tell from this picture that the game is chaotic and anything can happen.

I’m no artistic mastermind but that is what I think. This is fairly solid. :slight_smile:

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I think you should have spread out the amount of “craziness” as most of it is just crammed in one corner.
Also I am not a fan of the brown texture at the back. Not sure what you could put there though.

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Yes, as @StrangeShiner said as well, in my opinion the wall does look stretched and maybe just put the water mark at the bottom!!
Overall it is very good!!!