Hi all, created a 30 second trailer for an upcoming game and would love some general feedback on it.
Trailer link: Wacky Gear Battle (Trailer) - YouTube
Thanks in advance!
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Looks fine but you need some text on the screen, your not explaining anything just showing gameplay. Which for some games can be fine but your game seems to have a lot of progressional based things and the cuts you showed weren’t substantial to the progression of the game.
The best rule of thumb is explain what there going to be doing, how to do it, the steps of progression in the game, and most importantly the GOAL!
The trailer look great, but it lacking text and a bit too fast.
I think I know what in the game, but not 100% sure.
Something like "GET READY TO BATTLE!! “FIGHT YOUR FRIENDS IN OVER 10 MAPS!!”, “COLLECT OVER 40 GEAR!!”, “GET THE MOST KILLS IN 10 MINS TO WIN!!”, and "COMING SOON 2023" would help people understand what the game is about.
A good game trailer should let the player know what to expected in a game, not confused them.
Also: game link?
Really cool. I personnally find the start a bit I don’t know, plain. Add more effects there. I’ll have to agree about the texts and stuff. Also seeing the maps shown in the trailer they seem too basic, maybe adding more textures to them would be better. Overall a 7.5/10 from me.