Tips for Improvement on my build please?

This picture depicts the front of a cozy coffee shop. Any tips or advice?

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restart is my tip also maybe use roblox character for scale use better textures and use reference

thanks for the advice, i added some features to the image above:

Thicker beams holding up the roof. Overhangs at the side of the building

pretty nice. the door and windows are way too big, the cylinders dont blend with that roof, the roof should be more hollow, the windows shouldn’t glow, its kind of undetailed, and thats it

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took some of the advice, edited the image above. ^^^

thanks for all the suggestions guys, i appreciate the help.

Restart but use the old one as a reference then think of every individual section in detail. For example, the building itself can be replaced with actual bricks and “concrete” in-between them and you could probably add slabs on the roof. Overall though, you’re on the right path. I started much like you. I suggest looking into meshes, you can use applications like Blender to create them.