This is my first attempt on my first lobby build and I would like any feedback on how it looks. Any criticism on the lobby is much appreciated as I would like to make this the best lobby it could be.
I’ve received feedback from the community, and I added more to my lobby! It honestly looks better, but if you feel like there should be stuff added, please reply!
I honestly think that you could do more about this. The lobby looks a bit too big, especially with the large amount of space that seems empty. If you want to keep the size, then you could a few things like a field of flowers, a pond or maybe a waterfall!
One more extra thing you could add is grass, not hyper-realistic ones, but cartoonish ones. A few tiny ones scattered around the map should be just fine. I hope this helps!
I already added a bit of little grass but I’ll be sure to add more! I will add more things to the lobby so it wouldn’t be that empty. Thank you for your feedback!
I think that you could change the lighting to a more realistic one, fill the lobby up a bit more and you could also try to change the parkour a bit to make it a bit more advanced, or you could add a seperate advanced parkour.
Thank you for your feedback. The obstacle course is pretty hard due to the timings for the platforms. Other than that, I can add another obstacle course so the lobby wouldn’t be that boring, along with other things.
This looks great for a first lobby build! There’s one major thing you could improve on a bit -
The sides of some things look a little too flat for the style, so it kind of feels a little too rigid.
For example the water fountain just feels a bit too basic with its few sharp edges and not a lot of detail or life to it. Another example is the trees. They look nice, but again don’t really have a lot of life to to them. Maybe try rotating each leaf a bit, or make the tree trunk segmented and a bit rotated. Overall, a great start though.
Thanks man! I can really see what you mean, it needs more life. The trees does look repetitive and straight. I’ll be sure to rotate the leaves and trunks as well as redoing the fountain. Thanks for you feedback!
