Updated Category: Wanted feedback on small project

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I just got back into Roblox and currently developing some things right now. Wanted some feedback on this little project I’m working on. It features a random room number on join.

( ✦ ) Untitled Story Game - Roblox
Untitled Story Game Devlopment Feedback Video (youtube.com)
This is a work in progress so there’s no actual story to the game it’s just some basic things.

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A few thoughts:

  • The objective text at the top left of the screen is kind of hard to read. I think you should make the text a lighter colour or add a frame behind the text to make it stand out more on a dark background.
  • The room numbers on the doors are also hard to read. The text on the label is kind of squished and the door is quite a bit taller than the player, which means you have to look up to try to read the door number.
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Maybe change the mouse to a crosshair or make it completely invisible.

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