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#1

Pursuit GFX

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Tycoon GFX
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#2

Using lighting could definitely spice it up a bit, but otherwise cool :smiley:

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#3

Looks pretty cool. Great job! Can’t wait to see more.:ok_hand:

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#4

Thanks!! Yeah I have been working on lighting. Also just got better at rigs.

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#5

Thanks a lot for the feedback!

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#6

Looks great! The only thing that I would point out is that the characters in the first gfx are almost off of the screen, which makes it a bit hard to tell what is goin on. Other than that, I think it turned out pretty well!

#7

Now I am not a gfx artist, but I will say the pictures look flat. I am giving you my advice because I was you to improve, so please do not take it to heart.

There isn’t good shading/lighting.
In the first one you should make the police lights light up
If you’d like, I can even use my drawing app to spice it up a little and show you what I mean by shading/lighting

#8

Ok working on the first ones lighting, thanks for the feedback!

#9

Hey long time no see, nice job on the GFX! Some lighting and effects would clean them up a bit, and the suit looks a little low quality but that’s it. Keep up the good work :grin: :+1:

#10

Also took a better look at the pictures and the vehicle pursuit looks a little noisy

Here is a video that helped me with denoising my renders

If the video doesn’t work it’s called “Blender 2.90 NEW Denoising for the Viewport, Renderer and Compositor” by IBN-Blender 3d Artwork.

#11

I fixed the Tycoon one, working on pursuit!

#12

Nice!!! That’s so good!!!

#13

Good job so far! I think you should get I better quality shirt on the second one.

#14

Thanks a lot, it’s rendering right now and so much less noisy!

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#15

The pursuit GFX needs to be denoised because I can see dots on everyone on the thumbnail.

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I recommend you watch some denoising videos or if you already know, I highly recommend you do that, the GFX won’t hurt if you do a lighting change to the GFX’s you have made.
But, most of the artworks you’ve shown looks neat.

#16

It is good, work on Textures, Camera Posing and Lightning.

#17

? That isn’t my GFX. if you scroll up you can see the persons GFX.