Weathermerry Dam Feedback

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#1

Weathermery Dam
Weathermerry Dam is a representation of a very empty experience of a dam and been in work for about 5 months.

This build includes a generator room, treatment room, dam walkway, office building, and a storage room.

What should be answered?

  1. What can I add/improve on?

  2. How is the theme fit?

  3. How is the lighting?

  4. Any bugs encountered that I can fix?

  5. Any other things you would like to add.

Video

Sorry for crappy frame rate!

Game Link

https://www.roblox.com/games/6170724129/Weathermerry-Dam

Have a great day!

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#2

I don’t know why but dam’s have always interested me. You should add a basement with tanks showing the water current moving the turbines to generate electricity.

Other than that suggestion I think it looks really good!

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#3

Greetings!
I thank you for your suggestion!
If you did could you possibly send a image reference?

(Nice idea also)

Have a nice day!

#4

These are the typical forms of hydroelectric turbines in a dam. The water runs through them and when they rotate, they generate electricity!

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#5

I actually have that in my game, it’s from a friend but never actually really showcased it.

Have a nice day!

#6

I’m not sure if you’re wanting feedback on the lighting too but I’d recommend adding more materials, maybe custom ones? It looks pretty good though.

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#7

Elaborate, like textures and more lively colors?
I’m going for a empty place in this build and I personally enjoy very dark colors.

#8

I love dark colors too! Try searching in the toolbox for textures to add to make more contrast, or if you can make your own! I’m not sure how to elaborate farther but I meant textures not materials.

#9

And by I’m not sure if you’re wanting feedback on the lighting I mean what about the lighting? Like the lights themselves or the atmosphere?

#10

The feeling, or like how it fits within the build.

#11

I’m assuming you mean atmosphere.

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#12

Sure. How is the lighting?
I personally think it’s quite eerie but fits the theme.

#13

I’m not sure what your settings are for it currently however for a more realistic feel my usual lighting settings ( basic settings ) set it to future instead of shadow map and set shadow softness to 0. I think you could add SOME sunrays other than that I’ll have to think.

#14

This isn’t in lighting but dust particles could help as well.

#15

Would you please describe how I would do that?

#16

The sunrays didn’t affect anything.

#17

I don’t know why but for it only shows when in testing.

#18

Would you like to join the game together and see some adjustments?
Please message me in DM’s.

#19

Ok I feel stupid but what’s a dm again…? :sweat_smile:

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#20

Message = DM

I’ve sent you a ROBLOX friend request by the way.