Hello guys! My name is astro, i’m still a beginner UI designer could you give me a feedback on my UI and if i should start doing commissions. (btw i used references of UI Designs i found from devforum posts and tried to recreate it)
this is my old UI design:
and this is my new UI design:
ik these are different styles but i still think i improved
i like them they are simplistic 
Your new design is very good, but I think the content is too big, you should make it smaller and the icons do not convince me, the first ones are like strokes but the ones below are filled
Thanks for the feedback! i will try to improve it.