Hello there, @RISING_ROBLOX and @Centvy are working on a tycoon and I want feedback on our shop design (exterior). before you send any feedback. you also can send a question and I will answer them all if you want. Anyway, here is the shop we working on before we release the game.
if you want to see the shop by yourself you can check out on my Low Poly Design: World Generator - Roblox
before you leave this topic if you wanna hire me after I finish this with my friend I only available on Saturday and Sunday and I will only work on 4 hours. so… if you wanna hire me you can send me a message onDiscord or Devforum. Discord: RisingRBX#4740
I hope you have a nice day and i will see you next time… Seeya!
I really love the blue.
But that being said, I think that the pole on the top with the two neon red stripes should be changed to neon blue/teal so it fits in a bit more… Other than that I think it looks amazing.
I think to turn the red into the blue neon part are good but I Dont know should I change or not. Anyway, thanks for the feedback and I hope you create a good build on the near future
Some extra details would be nice to have outside of the shop
Some recommendations would be some simple:
Chairs
Tables
a trashcan
a green trashbin at the back of the shop near a backdoor
some cans or crumpled papers on the floor
and maybe a neon “SHOP” sign like those light-up shop names
Neon on the “shop” sign are pretty great but it to bright and the colour a little bit liquid. the chair, the table, the trash can and also the green trash bin sound pretty good idea but it not a cafe you know
Pretty cool, is there anything added inside the shop? Or it’s just a basic showcase model. If you’re planning to add anything inside, I recommend to change the transparency of the glass to 0.5-0.7. Besides that, everything is well built especially the Shop sign. It caught my eye immediately, awesome work!
That’s actually very nice. The papers, wood and other stuff for decoration is absolutely amazing! From my POV, you’ve done a very nice job on the shop.
Very nice totally in-keeping with the rest of the things you’ve build. Its a cutesy cartoon minimal style that definatly works on roblox.
Problems:
There’s a few clipping issues round the back of the university
There just need to be more of everything. The cafe looks way better than the shop just cos its got a few palm trees out front and seems more part of the environment
Thanks for the feedback.