What do you think about this camp fire I made?

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#1

What would you rate it, or maybe add to this?
https://gyazo.com/54a4766bf11f9bef379554ffc777ec0e

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#2

Great Job! You did it! You made best model of campfire! Keep this amazing job! you doing great!:star2:

#3

Thanks, it was only my first time tho…

#4

The particles are just fine but you could add some details to the build itself, more specifically to the logs, they could be a bit better, but overall it’s pretty good and you’re doing great, nice job!

#5

True, I did rush this but yes you are right, adding more the the logs would look good.

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#6

Maybe the logs should be on the ground rather than propped up

#7

hmmm, maybe. I will consider that.

#8

Hello, When i was looking at your campfire it looks very good, But there’s small things that could make it look better! (Maybe)

Here’s some things i found that you could improve.

  • Add fire sparks, This could add more detail. (But not every game looks good with it.)
  • Give each logs a tiny bit of diffrent rotation, This makes it look more natural.
  • Add tiny rocks around the side. (This is used to stop fire from spreading, And is a nice detail.)

But other than that, The fire looks good, Hope this list helps! :slight_smile:

#9

I liked the idea of putting rocks around it, did not think of that.

#10

I can’t do something like that, this is perfect

#11

If you don’t know how to make that, just look up fire partials or something o Youtube. Incase you wanted to know @HSFBSHHGG2

#12

No, you dont know who i am, i am world worse developer, i cant do nothing in studio

#13

Don’t think like that, just try doing small things and practicing. Tutorials could help out. After some time you’re going to see some change

#14

Love the particle effect, low poly vibes for sure. Very nice job man.

#15

Thanks man. I learned it from someone else though so I can’t really take full credit.

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#16

This is really nice for your first time! I suggest adding some more texture to the logs, as well as some more logs to add a more realistic look. I think that adding some rocks around the campfire rather than just having a circle would make it look super realistic as well!!

#17

yea I bet, thanks for the feedback.