What do you think of my place?

This is my first post on the forum.
So this is my place that I made months ago and I want to know what others think about it.

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Multipurpose Center - Roblox

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Welcome to DevForum!
The place looks nice, but on the third picture - are that mountains behind the building?
They don’t fit to the building , but that’s just my feeling. Otherwise it is very nice!

Welcome!

I noticed that you have like 3 different styles of trees in the game, and they aren’t mixed together for variety either since they’re in groups of the same type of tree, so it all looks a bit weird.

Hey, Welcome to the forum!

From the standing of your images, your place looks colorful, energetic, and lively. It really has an ambience of nightlife. I’ve noticed you put incredible detail into the small things, such as the computers and models. However if you want to improve upon what you have, then make multiple variations on models. This will add a little realism, not everything is alike. You may also put more detail into the building itself such as the fireplace and outer appearance.

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Welcome to the devofurm @xavierproman2 :slight_smile:

I really like your build here. I took a look at the game, one thing right off that bat that I would suggest is by creating more realistic architecture for the exterior of the building. Perhaps adding more detail to the roof.

The street lights are pretty good as well, what I would recommend is try out Blender and 3D Model them, and to really get a nice curved hang for where the light part is.

Also, nice thumbnail on the game. It’s really clean and I absolutely love it.

Welcome! @xavierproman2

I like your build, the game looks really nice the only thing that i saw. Where those green shaped like mountains in the back i would suggest you replace that with some trees or flowers and rocks!!

In the front of the building. You could add some flowers and some little bushes in the front of it. You should add some details on the roof area and add, more decorations around the building!!

That’s really all like. All the details you added to the place.

Welcome to the forums my friend!

I do have to say, your use of materials was pretty good, but I suggest working on those “mountains” on the third picture. Also,

I agree with this one, so I suggest you try working on it.
This is a very good build in my opinion. Hope you enjoy your stay in the forums!