What yall think of my new horror game?

Help and Feedback Creations Feedback
1

It’s a work in progress rn, I just need feedback on if it’s scary or not. Monster Tycoon! 💀 - Roblox

3 Likes
2
  • thumbnail looks memey or not serious for been scary
  • game description doesnt really tell me much about the game
  • overly bright game for trying to be actually scary
  • the main thing that i find not even scary just really unfunny is that very loud sound that makes people think their device crashed or whatever 1/10 and cause of this its not even worth further reviewing
4 Likes
3

I made it completely different from what it initially seems intentionally, my idea is the player might explore a bit. I had my sister test the game and she said it was pretty scary

3 Likes
4

your sister was probably really young and of course shes going to be scared cause of the noise/static ui with a very loud sound thats plays for several seconds (maybe infinite didnt bother checking) that makes you want to instantly quit the game

for an older demegraphic atleast have more of a suspenseful horror or something, but i doubt you will cause this just seems like a throwaway game anyways imo

2 Likes
5

I’d like to know what i could do to make it better, I just started making it the night before yesterday. I just needed some feedback so i can make it better

1 Like
6
  1. remove the loud sound and static ui
  2. make the environment darker then start actually trying to make the game look good overall
1 Like
7

I’ll prolly replace the static with smt else but, the atmosphere density is already set to .9 and 1 when the light flickers. i could make the surface light darker but idk what to do to make it look much better

8

if you’re stuck with not knowing what todo then use references from other games or images

9

This should go in Help and Feedback > Creations Feedback

10

make the brightness in lighting lower.

11

Did i click on the right game? This was not scary AT ALL, idk what your sister eas thinking. Do you think its scary?

12

NEVER MIND i thought it was just a tycoon game :sob: I played for longer then left cos i was like i cant even see all the doors at once, im not ready for this adrenaline rollercoaster, it was creepy and i knew what to do kinda, but i wasn’t sure how the monster would work, i left too early :sweat_smile:

13

It teleports by nodes and if you see it at any door while the alarm is going then u gotta close the door

2 Likes
14

How do i know when to open it then?

15

you just click the button again, if the button doesn’t work it only doesn’t for 8 seconds. I intentionally added that so the game is a little scarier and not so easy

16

did you even try the part after the static anyway?

17

Nice, maybe just make thr buttons a lil bigger, i didn’t notice them at first

18

read what i previously said to understand my full thoughts

19

I fixed that part, i made the static 1.5 seconds and half the volume as before.