Hello, I have been working on a game called Dxrk Cafe. Sadly enough my brother had a virus plugin. So we deleted the game. So we made a whole new build and I need help & feedback on the build.
Please give direct feedback I would really like to improve on the game!
Also another thing I recommend, dont have your name as Dxrk, if you want a peaceful community. Do not put x’s in the name of your games, i’ve had this mistake many times where my game is flooded by the stitch face wearers ( who are usually toxic)
I liked your Café, but I could decorate the place more, change the font of your logo, put more things inside the store like table plants, sachets, TVs, maybe discreet paintings or posters, add aspects to the countertop like a box (where you put it money), other drinks, food, in addition to putting a toilet …
I love the nice low poly feel to it but add some more decor to the furniture and add some stuff like posters to the wall to make it look even better, and also the build has such a low poly feel it makes the text feel somewhat out of place.
Some tips and advice would be. Always use reference. Even if you’re trying to create something unique. Using references to get the base shape and then changing it to fit what you want after is beneficial.
Also, I’m not 100% if you used an external modelling software or roblox to make the chairs. But my advice would be, switch to a modelling software. there’s so much more fluidity with the ability to not only alter the mesh itself, but to add those smaller details.
My next would be, take your time when modelling something. It doesn’t matter if it’s something real easy or not, as a beginner, it’s always crucial to take your time when you work on something.
Using Blender or some other modelling software will also help your issue with the docking outside of the cafe not being even, you could use a modifier in blender called array, which’ll help you get those perfect gaps in between and it’ll also be consistent, so no small then big gaps etc.