[WIP] Feedback on swamp scene

I’m working on this scene for my showcase. It’s still a work in progress. What do you think of it so far? Anything I can improve on or add?

Hard to tell exactly what you’re going for from just this screenshot and nothing else. The only things that come to mind are

  1. Swamp usually implies a forested wetland. There are no trees in this scene so far.
  2. Again, if it’s a swamp I would expect murkier water and more stuff floating (plants, debris) in the water. and more foliage along the shore (reeds and rushes).
  3. Dock but no boat/canoes to justify it. I’ll assume that’s already planned though.

That’s only if you’re really going for a “swamp” vibe, rather than cabin-by-the lake though, I guess.