Working on A Tycoon Game For 13 Day

i working for this tycoon game for 13 day and its still in alpha version…
What Do You Think About This Game?? :thinking:
Good or Bad?

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https://www.roblox.com/games/5301186735/City-Tycoon-UPDATE

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I played it, and there are some things I noticed:

  1. The lobby is not appealing. I recommend hiring somebody to build your lobby for you.
  2. The icons were really blurry, and I could tell you were using Offset and not Scale.
  3. I had no idea what to do. Maybe adding a tutorial would help new players know how to play.

Overall, the game is not very appealing. It needs a lot of work. I am not saying this to discourage you, but rather to help you. My recommendation to you is to hire some builders and UI designers. Good luck :slightly_smiling_face:

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This needs to be improved… a lot (I’m not trying to hurt your feelings or anything.)
Here is a list of what you need to improve/fix on:

  • Make the Lobby look more appealing. The Lobby doesn’t resemble the game at all in fact it has nothing to do with a city.
  • The Tycoon doesn’t work. The point of the game is to build a city, how are you supposed to do that when you can’t even start the tycoon?
  • If you hired somebody to make that GFX, well I’m afraid to say you have been scammed. The GFX is incredibly blurry and obviously hasn’t even been rendered.
  • The Rebirth UI is wayyy to big and you can’t see the tutorial due to it.
  • The Rebirth UI doesn’t work.
  • It’s really hard to understand where to go and how to start.
  • The Buildings are just duplicated you haven’t changed anything, maybe try different sizes?
    THIS IS ONLY FEEDBACK TO HELP YOU PLEASE DON’T BE OFFENDED BY THIS @flowAces
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@ToonShader That’s what I was on about.
You can’t see the tutorial due to the Rebirth UI.

Thank you for your feedback :+1:
I will fix this rebirth button :sweat_smile:
and everything is made by me and that’s really hard to fix this many things…
But i Try My Best

Thank you for this idea, i will make a tutorial :smile: