Would these sentences be good to turn into sounds?

I’m planning out some audios for my game. I want feedback from the Dev community to make sure they would be nice audios! Something to note: I am a programmer, not a voice actor and I am not good at making good sentences for audios. Also these audios are Inspired by QSERF and these Audios will be for 8SPRF, A Fusion reactor game.

The sentences will be formatted like so:

  • What the audio will be used for
    The audio in text form

Ok, Let’s begin!

  • Meltdown just started, Before shutdown window.
    Attention all reactor operations personal. Primary Mass Proton Reactor controls systems failure detected. All reactor controls are irresponsive to: Primary control connections diode.

  • Meltdown just started, Before shutdown window. More obvious something is going VERY wrong.
    Mass Proton Reactor Primary control diode system failure preemption protocol initiated: Engaging facility wide level 10 emergency.

  • Repeats at random during meltdown
    Attention all non-scientific personal, Please evacuate immediately!

-10 seconds after preemption protocol
Mass Proton Reactor temperature is rising dramatically. Estimating a MPR Thermal runaway. Engaging facility lockdown in 7 minutes.

  • 1 minute after preemption protocol
    Estimating time till reactor implosion. (5 seconds) Emergency! Mass proton reactor containment will fail in T-10 minutes. The option to engage the Proton Relief System will expire in T-5 Minutes. Lockdown doors closing in 6 Minutes.

  • Shutdown activated. Successful
    Proton Relief System initiated. Extending support arms wait(10) Checking shutdown systems. Please wait (waits 30 seconds, suspense music) Proton Relief systems… successful. Deactivating Power lasers. Closing combustion Intake valves. Disabling proton beams. Move superstructure into holding chamber. Blast doors will open in 30 seconds.

  • Shutdown activated. Integrity to low
    Proton Relief System initiated. Extending support arms wait(10) Checking shutdown systems. Please wait (waits 30 seconds, suspense music) Proton relief systems… Failed. Core super structural integrity is to low to absorb protons. Sending emergency alert to Neighboring cities.

  • Emergency alert noise
    (Geiger counter and raid sirens in background)
    EEERRRRRRRRRR EEEEEERRRRRRRRRRR OIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII An evacuation immediate has been issued for the following counties. Gwinnet county, Forsyth County, Rockdale County, Walton County. A event of immediate danger has occurred at the 8 Space Proton Research Facility. The Mass Proton Reactor has experienced a thermal runaway and the primary shutdown systems have failed. A Implosion is estimated in 5 Minutes. A Statewide emergency has been initiated for the State of Georgia, USA. Please evacuate to a blast shelter, Make sure to bring a radio, food, water, and any other supplies needed for survival. This is not a test. This is not a test. EEEEEEEER EEEEEEER OOOOOOOIIIIIIIIIII

That is it for now! I Will edit this post or make a new post for new sentences I might make for sounds, Be sure to rate them in the replies!

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Yeah. Those are great and very engaging. Keep up the nice work : )

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Sounds like an interesting game. Might play it, just remember, audios can get a little pricey so make sure you can afford it. (Pricey to me, anyways. I don’t buy a lot of robux.)

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I’ll keep that in mind! Thank for your feedback.

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