Get red of the glasses and add glowing eyes
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get red of glass or get rid? ye im doing a new gfx i may add eyes glowing on it
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Pretty plain, no real facial expression apart from the default face and the background is very blank. Maybe add a club or something else to look at other than you and the logo?
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ye sure ill work on it soon on my upcomming gfx im not good on using 3d models for gfx.
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instead of the lighting being an outline I think it would be cool if it was swirling around him but its very epic!!
also I think the default face is fine but you should make him look like he’s flying because he doesn’t appear to be standing on anything but his pose looks like he’s standing on something
how did you do the lighting
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ye i will make a outline type for it on my next gfx i used lightning with black background and color darken it
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You can SERIOUSLY see that its in a box.
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yes i see it anyways this gfx sucks i made more new
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I recommend putting it in a hollow sphere! 
Spheres have no edges cause… well, their round.
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oh ok im doing a different thing on upcoming gfx
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For the background, I would change the lightness to make it lighter, then add shadows on the shes, so it provides depth and detail. A simple touch, but would really make it ten times better.
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oh oki im new to gfx so yea im just learning i can make it better 20 times 
because i got photoshop now
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It’s all good, of course, there are areas to improve but there are always areas to improve no matter who’s making it. Keep it up!
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Maybe make the render itself bigger, it might help a bit!
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This is more of a nightmare than a dream kind of environment and I don’t get the island part but anyway, adjust the lighting that is being directed at your character and maybe give a proper pose for the effects in general.
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lol nvm this gfx i got more few gfx you can check the new post the new gfx i did good i guess cuz i am satisfied on it lol. thank you!
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they look kind of good but my only complain is the posing being to stiff that’s it.
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oh thank you! actually my laptop is bad when i work on stuff it shows not responding so i dont do a lot of pose stuff.
Also IDK if anyone already said this but the glasses need an outline or a shadow under them its quite hard to separate them from the face.
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chief, my laptop is the definition of outdated hunk of metal and I can still pull off impressive stuff. just switch your viewport to solid view and start posing and if you seriously somehow don’t know how you can just look for reference photos on google or heck, just take a picture of you doing the pose that you want.
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