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Well…
Pretty hard to notice how much unused space there is, i sugggest you fill itc other than that it looks good!
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And I forgot about that too
I thin the proportions of your room are a bit odd; the very wide floorplan makes the room appear very empty, while the low ceiling makes it simultaneously feel quite claustrophobic. I would advise shrinking the walls down a lot, raising the ceiling a couple studs to give yourself some breathing room, and perhaps filling the room with more stuff. The bed could be made a bit taller, too, as right now it almost looks like it has been squashed.
More natural light fixtures could also help liven the look - most people don’t have little glowing squares all over their ceiling!
Critiques aside, I do find your choice in colors quite nice, the warm hues do make it feel decently cozy. Hope you can make some more stuff after this!
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I suggest using a rig/dummy that serves as a reference for how big the room and the furniture are in comparison to a “person” or player. Other than that, I think it looks good!
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It does look like they’re sleeping on concrete pillows. You should make them SmoothPlastic or make a custom material.
Desk & furniture: 10/10! Maybe be a little more detailed and add a cord for the lamp on the desk, and maybe a few drawers.
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