Hello, I built a cafe, and I was wondering if I can have some feedback.
NOTES: It took me about 6 hours to build this, so not finished, and not perfect. I’m proud of myself for build 2 whole floors, I do 1 floor cafes most of the time. Also, the stairs are Invisble sooo, you might not figure out how to get up there, but the stairs are invisible! RENEMBER THAT!!
Anyway, Tysm!
GAME LINK: Amy cafe! [FINAL] - Roblox
you should probably add some chairs to the first floor but beside that BRAVO!
Ah, yes! It’s not done, and THANK YOU SO MUCH! If you can believe it, I’ve posted on devfourm a lot, and I’ve NEVER gotten positive feedback, so It means a lot! 
You’ve probably never seen me becuz I got accepted yesterday XD
Nope, you have commented on my post a lot, lol. I also follow you, haha.
XD Cool if you want to chat you can just friend me or smthg
Great game, it really good! 
Thank you, I really appreciate it!
You’re welcome, have a good day!
Yup! You too!
Hope to see more replies from you soon!
First of all, how long have you been working on this exactly? I mean, what even is in the game? It does not look like a Café - in my opinion.
I played another game of yours, “The pink Obby.” I also gave you some advice on how to improve; it looks like you did not listen.
I will say this one more time, to improve, you need to work on your building skills. For starters, add chairs on the first floor - to make it look like a Cafe. Secondly, you need to add some things to the walls - to add detail.
Sorry, this looks nothing like a cafe right now
Did you join the game? Instead of saying that the game is good, you should be giving advice on how to improve it…
Okay, thanks. Uh, well it’s NOT done… 
So? I just gave you feedback so I hope you actually listen this time instead of dismissing it.
Dude chill out you can’t treat everyone like they are pro builders. You’ll just end up overwhelming people.
I was about to ask if this was done or not lol. The second floor looks pretty good though.
Mhm, evrey time you comment you treat me like a pro builder, and tbh, I’m just gonna keep building my style. Next time, please don’t tell me if it’s good or bad, tell me what I can do to change it. Thank you.
Thank you, and none of the floors are finished.
But if he can’t tell you whether or not your build is bad, then he won’t say why you should change it lol
I’m giving advice on how to improve. I tell someone CLEARLY if it is good or bad. I hate beating around the bush; I tell them straight. If I don’t, how will they improve?
If that isn’t advice Idk what is…
Exactly, thank you. I’ve seen people who say it’s nice without even stating why. When I do see that, I start to think if they even like it. If something is good, you praise it. You also have to give reasons as to why it is good. That can help people reading the post because they can read the feedback given and learn from it.