Camp Dead Fish Story - My first Complete Game

After 11 months of hard work, here it is…

https://www.roblox.com/games/5590587999/CAMP-DEAD-FISH-STORY?refPageId=c9783068-165c-4ef4-b1e3-98a9f1972874

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The game is currently private!

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Can u make it public? I cant join cuz it says its private

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Its public now, I beleive. I’ll double check

Thanks, I fixed it, its public.

Too many emojis will make it so people are less likely to find the game :face_with_raised_eyebrow:

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OMG THE LAKE MONSTER BOSS FIGHT IS SO COOL!!! I really like the game so far!!
Edit: The part where the alien fights the monster is so well animated and the attacks are chef kiss how did u make em?
Edit 2: Sorry for all the edits but the dialogue is so funny but so LONGGG plz make it shorter especially at the end I sat through like 10 or 20 minutes of straight dialogue

Also a bug here:
After I fought wolves the damage tags didn’t go away

Edit 3: OK I PROMISE THIS IS MY LAST EDIT- Finished the game after a bunch of dialogue and I really liked it!!

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Oh that’s cool, yeah I spent a lot of time on that one.

I’ll take them out of the title, thanks!

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I did the alien in Blender, as a custom model, imported, as well as the tentacles on the boss. Took a lot of work, as i’m not a pro in Blender. Also tweened the parts for the fireballs to expand in size and rotation. I’ll probably improve that scene a bit more when I have time, but this took me forever. lol

I mean how did you make the swirls of hot air around the fire balls that then explode? They have a cool texture thing

Holy mother of god, I’m seeing the lights!

Tone the lighting down a LOT. Like, I don’t even know if sun rays in real life would look like this, unless you’re close to death or something.

This NPC’s face is floating off his head.

Some other things:

  • The buses do not immediately teleport the player once they depart.
  • Maybe it’s just me but usually I’m not 17-30 fps laggy on low poly games. Could be just me however. Not only is the game itself lagging but the text that appears when you are talking to a NPC is laggy.
  • Most NPCs do not have a face which makes them look lifeless.

UNLESS the low framerate is just my laptop today, because it usually is equal or higher than 60 FPS, you need to look into what is causing the lag. A slow game like this will make players leave because you aren’t getting anywhere.

This game needs a little more time to be polished, especially these details in the game that really change the overall feel of the game. I believe you have the mechanics for a story game down, but aesthetically, there is room for improvement.

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I used Blender to create those. Actually, I learned from a youtube video on anime VFx for Roblox, I believe .

Check this video:

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Okay! I’ll try toning down the lighting in the lobby, and finding proper faces.

Yeah, its in alpha/beta, so I figured I better get it released and see what else needs polish.

Thanks for all your feedback!

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