Howdy,
Please verify that the place you are trying to teleport to has the correct ID and is also under the same experience. If you are trying to teleport to a place outside of the experience, then you must enable Third-Party Teleports in the game settings. Additionally, make sure the place you are trying to teleport to is a version that is published.
I also want to point out that passing a place ID through a remote event may be risky. Explotiers may be able to use this remote to access restricted places if they get their hands on the said restricted place ID. You can add a check within the server script for allowed places (like a table).
Let me know if this helps! Thanks.