Great tutorial but I have some critiques:
- Your code uses properties that don’t exist, such as
Player.team
, where it should bePlayer.Team
. - You don’t really explain how
next
operates and what’s happening in the code sample. - You’re not using proper English that people can understand. (You’re using slang like “peps”).
- In the “to long” section, for your second code example, you didn’t explain why what you did was better other than it was “short.”
- Mainly, there’s a lack of explanations.
Majority of my critiques are just nitpicks so don’t take them personally.