Hi so i made this game and i would like feedback on it–I am unsure what I should od next with it–if it is ready for me to advertisie it or what. I would like to know other people’s thoughts:
Thanks!
The game is pretty decent. Though there are a few things I’d like for you to fix:
- The lantern is way too bright (When you’re in the lobby)
- During the “Get the axe in the shed” part, I’d saw some weird, black entities just standing there.
- Maybe highlight where the trees are at and maybe add in a simple particle effect to know your cutting down the tree.
- Highlight stuff you can telekinesis with since I got stuck on the part and left.
Overall, your game gets a 6-7/10. It’s a good starting point, though I think the game could’ve been better. Happy game development!
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Thank youo so much for the feedback! I will tone down the lantern brightness in the lobby. I’m not sure if you got to the part, but the black entities attack you later in the game. For telekenisis, I cannot highlight everything yoou can use it on as that would be super heavy on performance. There are selection boxes on things youo can interact with and a red hand indicator for telekenisis items. I am sorry this was not very clear.
Do you think it is good enough for me to start sponsoring it?
I’d made the back entities look at you from afar before they quickly rush you down afterwards. Not only it’ll make the player uneasy but also shock them if they suddenly started to attack you.
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I thought about doing that but it’s not supposed to be a horror game really. Thank you for the feedback though! 
Really? What is the game about exactly?
It is supposed to be a story game sort of like Break In story
So essentially a story game with horror elements into it? Pretty good honestly.
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I think you can start with smaller budgets so you can analyze statistics. If its good enough then you can use bigger budget