G’day, as stated, you are trying to create a low poly tree. I would suggest making the texture all smooth plastic for a cartoon look, and also finding a reference image to help with your build.
Just my personal preference, but I do like the style the tree is in. I love the blocky style of building and low poly in general. This is a good tree for a beginner and you should be proud!
Can’t really say this is a low poly, I suggest you search up what low poly style builds are because your build is a simple Roblox style build. For your first build, it looks decent, it reminds me of the old Roblox
If you are going for low-poly, don’t use just squares. Some smooths, rotations and curves actually look cool. Also, low-poly is more plastic-like, so you may play with materials and colors.
Quite simple actually, maybe add some branches, and instead of just a pyramid shaped leafs, perhaps just make it a bit more a blocky tree like, when you see a tree in nature, you don’t expect it to look like that right?
Also maybe try to add some meshes to the trunk, maybe make it a cylinder, you name it. Add roots too.
it’s good for a first build, but if you are going for a low poly style you should change the build. Low poly doesn’t really mean simple. Also I would make the apples spheres, and a other sphere negating it to have that caved in effect. The tree looks to shruken in my opinion on the y axis. You should make the blocks stacking up get bigger in a more slower pace, basically add more rectangles.
Try to focus on using a variety of parts in your builds if you’re planning on creating your trees in studio.
Using parts such as:
Cylinders
Wedges
Spheres
These parts will add more variety to your builds.
However, for plants and small parts of your map like trees, bushes and shrubs I’d advise using a rendering application to bring those parts of your map to life.
Overall, pretty decent. Keep building and you’ll see yourself progress as you go on.
Sir.
A pine tree essentially has a cone-shaped canopy. The peak will be smaller than the base. The apple tree she’s made has a cone shape with a smaller top and a larger bottom. The transition will be smooth. It will have a triangle shape.
Furthermore, instead of having multiple trunks only one is seen. Pine trees often have a singular, upright trunk.
Tell me, does her tree have a cone shaped canopy? Does her tree have one straight trunk?
Moreover, apple trees do not have a cone shape. They more resemble an oblong or a resting oval rather than a cone or a triangle.
I know my plants. I love botany and that most certainly looks like a pine tree.
You’re the one with vision impairment.
It is a low detail apple tree, it’s not supposed to be detailed and correct, a pine tree is typically tall, while an apple tree remains quite short. shaggy.
That’s what’s making it look odd. Apples on a pine tree. Which is why you’re trying to make it not a pine tree.
We can carry this further in the DM’s if you want, but I honestly think we should stop continuing this argument on this post.
I won’t respond to further posts with more posts.
I think we can all agree that it needs some form of improvement, either way.
lol arguing about what apple fits on what tree? Pretty sure she just wanted to make a tree and wasn’t aware or cared for the types of tree. The tree itself looks fine,though I’m not a huge fan of the pyramid look. Try a sphere