Feedback: My "Dystopian" Themed Game

a two weeks ago I have been working a bit on my “retro” project, trying to replicate a futuristic, modern, retro, chaotic but beautiful world (I am horrible at explaining btw).

Here you have some of my progress which includes:

  • Dynamic text boxes
  • Animated Proximityprompt (I don’t know how to describe it)
  • Retro lighting
  • Inactivity animation
  • Backpack space limiter
  • etc

any opinions?

-ProximityPrompts:

-Inactive Animation & lighting:

-DialogueText (with billboardgui)

-Backpack limiter (the text looks badly scaled because I recorded it in roblox studio)

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If i’m being honest, i’m not 100% sure what you mean by retro, but I do like the lighting a lot

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your work looks super sick! I know so little on the topic but man that looks quality

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i like your progress so far

i’m not sure if that white highlight is distance based or if it has a slow fade, but i think it would look better with a faster fade and higher transparency
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the dialog text looks weird when being resized
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you could probably try a typing effect with AutomaticSize to fix it
also the text would look better if it was aligned on Y

i noticed you can have multiple prompts at once (i’m assuming this is a bug)
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the animation is pretty flat (i’m not an animator so i can’t really give proper feedback)


some of the things i said are just my opinion so don’t feel obligated to make any changes.
you could tell that the project is new, but the dialog and prompt design told a lot; i really like where this is going

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For the proximity prompt you need really ought to have some killer audio to take it to the next level. Probably have a rising, high pitched sound while you are holding the button to give suspense. And then give a nice ding when the prompt was completed

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try use another movement it’s will be much better :thinking:
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like this movement it’s kinda simple and everyone use it :frowning_face:
but i love it! keep going! :star_struck:

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I followed your suggestions

changed the animation of the dialog a bit.

and also change the transparency of the highlight

and about the proximity prompt I am working on it

I’ve made a lot of progress with other things but then I’ll upload them to devforum, in fact I just uploaded a new post if you want to see it and thanks for giving me suggestions ;),